Day: April 1, 2015

Review of ‘The Cause’

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The Cause by Roderick Vincent will disturb most readers, but it’s the kind of disturbance that’s good for the soul. I received a free copy of this book in exchange for my review.

In The Cause we meet Isse Corvus, who has risen from the ghetto to become first an LAPD cop, and is then accepted by the CIA. Soon after joining the Company, Corvus is invited to attend training at the Abattoir, where he meets the mysterious Seee and is exposed to a regimen of training and a train of thought that shakes him to his very core. Against the backdrop of increased government intrusion into the private lives of individuals, and the increased militarization of elements such as local police, we’re treated to a chilling story of individual growth and self-awareness and the often distorted views of what constitutes patriotism.

Your blood will alternate between chills and boiling as Corvus discovers how far he is able and willing to go for a Cause – a Cause that the reader is left to wonder if he truly understands. Although this story is set in the 2020s, it mirrors the headlines in our media today, and you’ll come away from it wondering how much was real and how much fiction.

A must-read for thriller fans – dystopian fiction at its best. I give it four stars.

#IWSG: Where Story Ideas Come From – 1

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InsecureWritersSupportGroup It’s that time again – time for another issue of Alex Cavanaugh’s Insecure Writer’s Support Group First Wednesday postings. Despite it being April 1, I’m not treating readers like fools, but I am reissuing a post I did long before becoming a part of IWSG, on where my story ideas come from. Hope you like it, and do suggest you go on over to Alex’s site to check out how you can become part of a great blogging experience.

Ideas for writing come from all kinds of places.  My Buffalo Soldier historical series grew out of a combination of inspirations. One day, I was sitting at my computer, surfing the Internet, and I came across a site about the Buffalo Soldiers of the 9th and 10th US Cavalry on the western frontier, and I realized that not many Americans know a lot about the colorful history of these African-American soldiers and the role they played in the westward expansion of the country.

The germ of an idea was planted.  What if I did a series of short stories (more like novelettes actually) that introduced them to readers?  The more I thought about it the more it excited me.  Several years ago, when I lived in North Carolina, I was a writer and artist for a short-lived magazine, Buffalo that was based in California.  I had a regular cartoon feature, did a few historical articles, and did the illustrations for several of the magazine’s covers.

So, I already had a bit of grounding in the subject; it was just a matter of how to kick it off.  I decided to center it on a few fictional characters, with the main character, Sergeant Benjamin Franklin Carter, and show the kinds of activities they were engaged in.  While I strive to make it historically accurate, I try to avoid long lectures on history.  Instead, I insert the historical facts and incidents in through the characters’ dialogue, or short descriptive passages to establish context.  My main objective is to tell an interesting story that will keep the reader turning the page.

I can’t be sure I’ve succeeded.  Reader feedback has been limited, but what has been received is encouraging.  raise indeed.  My friend, Zimbabwean author Virginia Phiri (Highway Queen), who has read and reviewed a number of my books, also commended the series, describing them as ‘good writing, and good reading.’

I use a lot of my own military background, as well as my childhood in Texas during the 50s and 60s, to establish the social, cultural, and geographic setting, as well as trying to make the language used by the characters as credible as possible.  None of the specific incidents in the stories are real, but they’re all based on historical events of the era after the Civil War when America was opening up the western frontier to settlement and development.

I do research on a continuing basis seeking new story ideas, and to make sure that the equipment, tactics, and events have a ring of credibility.  For instance, during my research, I discovered that the US Cavalrymen, contrary to what you might see in the movies, didn’t use repeating rifles during this period.  They used the single shot Springfield because the army viewed it as more reliable and durable than the new Winchester repeaters, and it was cheaper.  Even in those days, the government was concerned about the bottom line.  I also learned that white soldiers received $24 dollars a month pay, and black soldiers $12 – which wasn’t bad money in the 1870s when you consider that when I enlisted in 1962, my pay was $72 per month.

So, you see, ideas for your writing can come from anywhere.  You just have to open all the doors and windows in your mind and let the light shine in.